User blog comment:Omnirock/Four Down/@comment-8706772-20130531031949

A lot more descriptive this time; you certainly slowed things down. It's pretty exciting to read about how he met the rest of the group... really interested in the Ork. And I'm 65% sure the horse/dragon is going to eat one of those lizard/rabbits...

Question: Are the rules to Bokaline important to the story?

If not, then all we really need to know about it is it's a card game. Maybe talk about strategies/cheats/skill used in this game, but the part where you explained the rules didn't really 'fit'. It sounds more of a sidenote.

Keep it up!