User blog comment:Omnirock/The Dark Bard's Journal-Fanfictions!/@comment-8706772-20130529032231/@comment-5760872-20130529042745

Thanks for the feedback, I tried to make it feel like an adrenaline rush so that explains the face paced action. And yes haha I just re-read it and noticed all those spelling errors, what can I say? This was written on an iPod with autocorrect. Honestly I had to respell the word "Bow" 7 times EACH time I wrote it because autocorrect thought I was trying to write "now".

Also in case you didn't notice or I didn't make it clear enough; Toby = starting Fighter Lia = starting Cleric Sukon = Barbarian Annais = Bard Astrid = elf Archer There were 3 other characters that I had left out because it was hard trying to find room for more than 4 characters already. Just in caseipost the next part or write a piece before this to I trod cue the characters, the other 3 would be: Tekketh = Summoner Raena = ice elf Fire Mage Siethel = Tekketh's summoned monster.